Reflect: This is a very nice video. I like the significance of the video, it very clear and clean. I like the shots of the children and it adds to the message.The shots are nice and very exact.
Inquire: I can see how you wanted to show the significance of family and stability in the family. It is something that is important and i think you covered it well.
Suggest: I would say that the soundtrack should be louder and the water sounds at the background should be reduced a bit. I will also add that the water sound being above the broll at the end seemed a bit odd because they are not at the pool.
Elevate: Other than that the video is nice and very interesting. The shots taken and the pacing is very good. I also think you did a very good job from your last submission. Keep up the good work.
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