WK4 Exploration: RISE Peer Feedback on Kemarr Simmonds Digital Story Video

This video definitely had a story that I could relate to, like I said in my own video, my parents also recommended the Media Communications Course at Full Sail to me. They were finally open to me going into the Media and Entertainment Industry and wanted to make sure that I was going to get my education in the best way possible.

I like the story of the video, as it explains what motivated the speaker to join the MCBS program in a very interesting and soul searching way.

Although, I will say that some of the visuals did not really connect to the narration. I would suggest that more solid visuals should have been used in describing the story. For example, when the narrator was talking about joining TV Extra, there should have been a picture representing TV Extra in some sort of way.

Also, I will add that the pacing of the visuals was just a bit too fast and should have been slowed down a little. Other than that, I will say that the video had a good story to tell. The emotion requested for the video was definitely there and helped bring out the storyline.

Lastly, I would say that no expansion is needed for the story because I already see it as complete.

Keep up the good work!